I am due to make improvements on my aims and context as well as my synopsis. I also intend to begin storyboarding my sequence soon. I have taken a look at the storyboard I produced over the summer break and have decided I should make improvements to my work, as I have changed my synopsis since then so my imagined film has a much stronger storyline.
Feedback from my teacher regarding synopsis:
"In a small peaceful village named Deville where very little occurs..." - remove "where very little occurs..."
"Demetria struggles to adjust to normal life after the deaths of many of her friends, but has gained much more awareness" - "Needs a stronger ending"
"Cause + effect = change - how has she changed?"
Also, I have been put into a group of 5 to work on the preliminary Maltese Falcon task, in which I will practice my filmmaking skills, re-creating the first 6 minutes of the film noir of the same name (John Hutson, 1941). I will take on the role as director.
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